Celebrating learning in our Year 6 Class at Hay Park School.
Hi Tai,Wow Look awesome well done Ka Pai Tai! This is awesome.Shreya
KIa Ora Tai,You have done an amazing work of retelling Maui and the Sun.It was awesome Ka Pai! Are you having fun?From:Toto
Thank you Toto
Talofa Tai,I love your comic,and I like how you re tell the story about maui and the sun,it makes people want to see your amazing work.From Cicilia
Kia OraTai, You have used your own words to retell the story of Maui and the Sun. It would be great to add more expression when reading by using some BOLD text or different punctuation.
I think you are very creative and clever. I wonder if you would show Morris class how to do this. Were you proud of this retelling? What will your next project be?
Kia ora Tai,I love the way you used a comic to retell the story you have been learning about in class. You showed what you really learnt about maui and the the sun and their "legend". Keep up the fascinating work.By : Alaskah.
G'day Tai,Your story is amazing. I can see that the story is in your own words and using your own characters too! Well done and amazing work! I think that you could use this little tip in your next pixton. Tip: Maybe you could change the lightness of the Sun in different parts of the story and change the characters movements!Thanks,Ashlyn
Chris.I like your beautiful story miss archer.
Hi Chris,It's so nice talking to you again. We really enjoyed camp. Are you enjoying your new school? Thanks for coming and having a look. We have been doing Imovie and descriptive writing. Tomorrow is our assembly..!!It's so nice talking to you again we have been missing you.Shreya
Hi tai,that was amazing now i know that you learnt something about Maui and the Sun and their "lengend" that is real learning.I think what you should do next time is maybe change the photo so we know what there doing next time. Have fun learning.From Moe
Hi Tai,Well done for retelling the story of Maui and the sun and I hope to see more from you.Maybe next time you could add a little detail to refresh what the person saying in the story other than that you did good,keep it simple next time